"Love is Poetry" ---a poem by me---

He kept telling me
that my verses are sharp
but empty.

that my sentences are too terse,
and my poems are too shallow.

 

He said poetry is in the number of words
and in eloquence you use.

then I said

"Love."

is that poetry enough for you?


Tags: , ,
Posted on 04/02/2008 3:01 PM Visits: 19
roxy16bulletcrazy: 04/02/2008 4:22 PM
omf that was like woooooow i love it plz keep writing when you get a chance
Comment bubble
ichirinxnoxhana: 04/03/2008 6:12 PM
That's a really good poem! I write poetry too.
Comment bubble
Add Comment
This person only allows registered users to leave comments. You must sign up or sign in to comment.
ARCHIVE
April 2008
PROFILE
3lizabeth0livia
Female 17
&Hearts; Rylan &Hearts;
Goreville Illinois, United States
PHOTOS
Me again
Me
MY FRIENDS


3lizabeth0livia's Journal Widgets:
RSS | ATOM | JavaScript
Buzz Feed